Discussion post about the revision of draft paper addiction is a disease

Revision is an important step of the writing process. Now that you have read about revision strategies, revisit your essay to prepare for this discussion activity. As you read over your essay, note what you did particularly well and what you want to improve.

For your initial post, address the following:

Describe what you did well in your draft. What made it so strong, and how will you use these strengths in other draft sections that may need additional work?

State which sections of your draft need further improvement. Why do you feel these sections need to be revised?