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Sydney-Discuss what part of your character would have changed/been different-Make more connections about you and your passions (fashion, women’s rights)

Sydney

REVIEW NOTES FROM ORIGINAL ESSAY
⦁ It reads more like a history lesson than a personal statement and should address the question: “Who am I?” and it should talk more about Sydney than the difference between being raised German or American.
⦁ Discuss what are my values that make me “Me” and my definition of success and the “Fabric of who I am as a person”
⦁ Show more of who I am rather than who German people are
⦁ Discuss what part of your character would have changed/been different
⦁ Make more connections about you and your passions (fashion, women’s rights)
⦁ What do I bring when I walk into a room? (Gymnastics opportunity for women’s rights)?


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