A personal statement that  can be use for a medical school application.

Reword it so it flows better and reads easier. Make it more personal, if you can add a story about something medical related that ties in, that would work. If possible, make the introduction start off by talking about ccurrent events like Covid and ebola and have it tie into the rest of the paper. It needs to be 1-1.5 pages, 12pt font, single spaced.

The topic is why do i want to be a doctor. it needs to include the following:
-Who you are
-What makes you unique from other applicants
-What motivates you to pursue a career in medicine