- Methodology
- Interviews were objectively used get rid of this sentence no method is objective
- Purposive sampling not random change that.
- Language tone down participant feeling humiliated change to feeling comfortable
- Not synonymous but anonymous
- Change the time of interviews
- I used an interview guide be clear (martial instrumentation) clarify there are more words as such please change to more understandable and clear words and sentences
- Why have you called the section assumption?
- What are you trying to convey / tell the reader?
- Write about Reproductive labour add a section betty Freidan feminine mystique in the literature review talk about the historic angle of chores the fight for paid housework feminist fight for. Broader research.
- Make sure references are sociological rather than phycological
