• Methodology
  • Interviews were objectively used get rid of this sentence no method is objective
  • Purposive sampling not random change that.
  • Language tone down participant feeling humiliated change to feeling comfortable
  • Not synonymous but anonymous
  • Change the time of interviews
  • I used an interview guide be clear (martial instrumentation) clarify there are more words as such please change to more understandable and clear words and sentences
  • Why have you called the section assumption?
  • What are you trying to convey / tell the reader?
  • Write about Reproductive labour add a section betty Freidan feminine mystique in the literature review talk about the historic angle of chores the fight for paid housework feminist fight for. Broader research.
  • Make sure references are sociological rather than phycological

 


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